Loyalist Letter to the British Government
- dmejias7
- Feb 6, 2017
- 2 min read
Humanities: February 6th, 2017
Title: Formal Letter to the British Government
Background:
After the loyalist reached Canada they found that conditions there were far from ideal. Some had inadequate housing and others had issues with French laws being in place instead of British laws. There were also some groups of peoples who felt discriminated upon by locals and recent immigrants.
The Letter Assignment: Loyalist Refugee Letter to the British Government
Imagine that you are a British loyalist who recently arrived in Canada after fleeing the thirteen colonies. Write a letter to the British Government through a parliamentarian explaining whey you are unhappy and asking them to remedy the cause of your unhappiness.
Rubric:
Rubric for Business Letter Writing
Task Description: Loyalist Refugee Letter to the British Government
Opening paragraph states all grievances concisely
Each subsequent paragraph develops one of the grievances
Final paragraph consolidates grievances and remedial action required
Criteria
weight
4 – Exemplary
3 – Accomplished
2 – Developing
1 – Beginning
Organisation
25%
Accurately uses correct business letter format (heading, greeting, introduction, body, closure, signature, enclosure, and copy)
Mostly uses correct business letter format (heading, greeting, introduction, body, closure, signature, enclosure, and copy)
Some noticeable errors in use of correct business letter format (heading, greeting, introduction, body, closure, signature, enclosure, and copy)
Several noticeable errors in use of correct business letter format (heading, greeting, introduction, body, closure, signature, enclosure, and copy)
Content
25%
Letter clearly states the purpose
Appropriate explanations or facts used to support the main idea
Easy to follow
Tone is appropriate for intended audience
Letter clearly states the purpose
Some explanations or facts used to support the main idea
Somewhat hard to follow
Tone is generally appropriate for intended audience
Purpose of letter is unclear
More explanations or facts need to be used to support the main idea
Hard to follow
Tone is too formal or too informal for intended audience
Purpose of letter is unclear
Main idea is not supported by explanations or facts
Letter rambles; hard to follow or understand
Tone is inappropriate for intended audience
Appearance
25%
Typed, using correct spacing, font, and format
Letter typed with few problems in spacing, font, or format
Letter typed with frequent problems in spacing, font, or format
Letter not typed; wrong format used and hard to read
Language Usage
25%
Accurate use of punctuation and grammar
No spelling errors
One or two mistakes with punctuation or grammar
One or two spelling errors
More than two mistakes in punctuation or grammar
More than two spelling errors
Incorrect use throughout the letter of punctuation or grammar
Frequent spelling errors distract from letter
Assignment Score ______________ + Beyonder/Bonus ______________ = Final Score ________________
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